Literary Narrative
(from “The Glass Terrace” by Laila Anders)
When Elise first stepped onto the terrace of the old café, she felt as though she had wandered into a painting. The cracked mosaic tiles shimmered with reflected sunlight, and the awning—striped in faded (5)green—fluttered like a sail above the empty tables. She had not been back in this coastal town since before her mother’s illness.
The café had been their place: a quiet refuge where her mother would sip bitter espresso and read aloud from (10)her dog-eared poetry anthology, pausing occasionally to explain a metaphor or to laugh at her own translations. Elise, twelve then, had listened in silence, half-understanding, half-dreaming.
Now, at twenty-seven, she was back for the first time (15)since the funeral. The waiter, a gray-haired man with the same cautious politeness she remembered, barely recognized her until she said her mother’s name. Then his eyes softened.
“Always with her book,” he said. “You used to draw while she read.”
(20)Elise nodded. The sketchbook, she thought, had been lost years ago—left on a train or misplaced during one of her hurried moves. Yet standing there, she could almost feel the coarse paper beneath her fingers, smell the coffee mingling with the salt air.
(25)She ordered tea, though she disliked it, and sat by the railing. Below, the harbor bustled: fishermen calling, children chasing gulls. On the opposite shore, the mountains were faint and blue, dissolving into haze. She opened her notebook and began to write—(30)something she hadn’t done in months.
The words came slowly, but they came. She wrote about return and memory, about things that vanish and things that stay. When she paused, the waiter approached again with a small plate. On it lay a (35)biscuit, shaped like a seashell.
“For you,” he said. “Your mother’s favorite.”
Elise smiled. The sea breeze lifted the corner of her page, and she placed the biscuit there to keep it still. For a moment, it felt as though her mother were (40)sitting across from her once more, the anthology open, the verses carried away by the wind.